Participial Overload
Lots of -ing tails and zipper clauses stacked on every line until the prose feels like one smooth machine-polished ribbon.
Examples (4)
Brian, leaning on his agility, evades blows.
Sara, reviewing prior drafts, rewrote the opening paragraph.
The policy, which had been revised following feedback from multiple departments over the previous quarter, came into effect on Monday.
The system, which was designed to handle all edge cases that arise during peak load, runs reliably in production.
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